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There are so many things I could tell you
I know it's what you want to hear
When you say "I'm here for you"
"My dear, for you"

When you pry and you pick
Into my life
You hope to be protection
From their lies and objections
But the harder you try
The more I realize

You don't know me

You wish I would open up
Your little flower, in her bower
Whispering...Prince, come take me
Come make me your Queen

Now you see with surprise
I'm not weak enough to fall
You're so confused and scared
I've caught you more than unprepared
And the harder you try
The more I see in your eyes

You don't know me

I know you mean well
I try to indulge
Try to make you feel better by lying how I hurt
So you give me fake advice
Built on my bed of lies
And you walk away thinking you saved another soul!

If I tell you what you want to hear
I know for now you'll disappear

'Cause you don't know me

I'm glad you don't know me
©2005-2009 ~fishfromheaven
:iconfishfromheaven:

Author's Comments

Sometimes I just get fed up with people who want to listen to me and help me through problems. They expect me to act a certain way: to break down crying and trust them with everything. They get angry when I don't, so I have to tell them SOMETHING to make them feel better. Or at least to get them off my back. Last night was one such instance. I was so angry, I churned out this song in about 20 minutes. The music is a little shaky, but it works.

DISCLAIMER: If you're a friend reading this, DON'T take offense. The truth shouldn't hurt as much as it does.

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:iconmuki-chan:
Dear, sweet, Lucifer, I know what you mean. Or, they expect you to ASK to talk to them, and they get upset when you don't.

Wonderfully done. The point was brought through excellently.
:iconfishfromheaven:
Thank you very much! Nice to know I'm not the only one dealing with helping-addicts.
:iconamanitagemini:
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Someone you know (subject of this) is like 40-50 years behind the times. Amazes me that women still need to go around with a sign "Empty Knights In Shining Armor Need Not Apply." Or bother.
Actually men need to do the doing, women make themselves quite clear enough, men don't pay attention or take them seriously
If men had the answers they wouldn't be killing themselves and others, there would be no Iraqs and Afghanistans and all the other horrors.
Many years ago a young lady friend of mine told me that she felt men and women were two different species, not variations on homo sapiens. I sometimes (like now after reading this) think she was right.
I have never given up on surmounting whatever that difference is, men and women can be real with each other; it's just that the time between such occurances can make for despair and bitterness.
I've written about the subject; the way you laid your lines out is totally awesome, if it were speech transcribed it would be bloody well to the point, as poetry it has a start-and-pause rhythm which I can feel here.

--
I represent a group called the Outlands Community USA. We live with our fears diminishing every day in the unobstructed universe. Ask me about it!
:iconmatchaz:
Great topic and presentation. I really like this one.

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